Hello, ereryone,my teacher asked me to give a English Speech,But I think there many mistakes in my speech,so my dearest.would please help me to correct my mistakes in my speech.Thank you very mucn!
I ‘ll use my body language.and I ‘ll draw some figure on the blackboard to help my speech
Hello,boys and girls:
I ‘m very glad to give a speech today.The title is mountaineering.As we all know the Everst is the highest peak in the world. The height is 8848 meters. So the mountain is coverd by snow all the year around.and many of the snow has changed into ice yet.Considering it’s so cold ,you have to wear as warm as you can when you climb the mountain.
Now,something to care about:
1.tools:
If the brae is flat ,that’s easy to climb.But most of it is abrupt,then the tools is very necessary.One of the tools looks like a “7″ each hand holds the handle,use your strength to attack the “7″ into the snow.one hand by one hand , you can clime higher and higher.
2.group work
There’s a whole line connects all the members together.And everyone was firmed by many lines.At the end of the line tied a corkscrew.Before the next step you must circumgyrate the corkscrew into the ice ,of course your parner who behind you will circumgyrate it out when it’s necessary. If your arms can’t bear any more ,you’ll fall down .so the corkscrew will save your life.but,sometimes the corkscrew will fall down,too.If your goup just have two or three members ,it’s very dandgerous.maybe all of your cordscrow will be pulled out in a short time.But if your group has ten members or so,that’ll be safer.
3.snow blindness
Just imagining.all the mountains are covered by snow it’s white,all the sky is white.So,you must close your eyes when the sunshine is very bright.or,Even keep your eyes open ten minutes you ‘ ll become blind. This kind of blind called snow blindness.
To tell the truth.I’m member of the Mountaineering Union in Xiamen University.You are wellcome to jion us.To be certainty remember:1.tools 2.group work 3.snow blindness.
Thank you for litsining !
