What do you think of my poem?

The Ant Revolution

The more the mob emotion respired
The more broken the act materialized
A fractured evolutionary warfare control
Tasting the divine immortality release of violence
Rising in the bitterness at the scattered enemy
An evil cruelly woven in oppression
Of the free will reality of abominations
The ideas in an ant rebellion
Shifting in the sands of the revivalistic procreative survivalists
The drunken death dream of the drowning virgin
The drone body of the exoskeleton

One Response to What do you think of my poem?

  1. sounds cool I never thought ants would be so cool and have so much to talk about……..but i like it personally….cause it really doesn’t have all that much to do about ants as it does to do with the general human population…………..I love………….implies that we humas are only ants in God’s giant chess game…….LOVE IT……10 out of 1

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    English Major at OSU. never a big poetry guy but I do creative writing so….

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