ok i have this problem that i start writhing poems but the most good ones never end. i just kind of get interrupted in the feeling of it and then poof!!!! i cant write it anymore.
here is one i wrote after someone sad to me something about killing muslims
dont think that we forgot at all
our brothers kill for nothing at all
our homes our dreams our lives fall
our people hurt and children crawl
the blood that covered every wall
dont think that we forgot at all
dont think that we forgot the fact
how we were quite and how you act
and of your actions what was affect
our smiles and joy all were wrecked
dont think that we forgot the fact
dont think that we forgot, again
our flowing blood and horror pain
our cries our shouts our roars in vain
the result of your freedom campaign
dont think that we forgot, again
dont think that we forgot the past
the bullets bang the rockets blast
the terror that on us you cast
the murder you did so vast
dont think that we forgot the past
dont think that we forgot the kills
your nasty rockets the leveled hills
our stubbornness and survival skills
dont think that we forgot the kills
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and i cant finish it!!! :@ can anyone of you finish it for me? and if someone here is good at poems
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i have like 5 or 6 poems incomplete LOL!!!!!!!!!!
anyways salam
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